You lost your sight along with everyone else on the planet. They called it The Great Blinding. Two years later, without warning, your sight returns. As you look around you realize that every available surface is painted with the same message: “Don’t tell them you can see”

October 14, 1907

My guide was waiting at the base of the stairs, calling up for me. I couldn’t breathe. I was locked in place looking out the window of the house. For at least two hours I stood there gawking at the blurry lines of the window frame, slowly seeing more and more details. Another call from below. Everything was still hazy, the focus was off, but there in the faint glow of the sunrise I could truly see. The light poured down the street, the sky was dark with clouds, but the sun rose and I could see.

My heart raced as the guide began his ascent up the stairs to check on me.

“I’m coming.” I shouted. Too loud, but my mind was racing, modulating my voice was hard. I could hear the waver in my words, my guide would inevitably hear it.

“Harold, are you in distress?”

“No, sorry. You roused me from sleeping is all.”

“Sorry to wake you, sir. It’s a half past 7, shall we begin our walk?”

“Yes, of course.”

I shuffled over to my dresser. The clothes looked pale, tattered. Like we’d been scrubbing them too hard and the dye had faded. I held my shirt close to my eyes and saw it for the first time. It was one that was provided to me after the Great Blindness overcame us all. I had only known its texture, its weight. It was a gentle auburn, like it was originally red but had since been covered in mud and washed with no great care.

I tried to regain my composure before Rupert reached my room in the small house. I’d never seen this room. I’d never seen so many things that were new to me. Now here I stood, fumbling for things I used to reach for instinctively. I closed my eyes. Everything went much smoother for a moment, blissful ignorance I suppose.

Rupert knocked on frame of the door, devoid of an actual door as privacy was trivial now. We lost so many people in the year following the Great Blindness, this house was given to me by one of the guides. The guides themselves were people that were blind before the cataclysmic night in early 1905. They acted as guides to those of us new to the darkness. As rewards for their service we provided everything we they needed to survive, working in tandem to plant the fields and tend to the animals.

Resources were so scarce, our small town of only a few dozen families was ravished by famine as people could not adjust to their lack of sight. A few passed due to consuming poisonous berries or rotten food, the latter of which made sense to me much more than trusting strange fruit. But as time went on and the stores of food diminished before a particularly harsh winter there had been a rash of passings took place. Whole families decided, or were forced to decide, to take their own lives. Spring came late the next year, what few crops were planted yielded low returns and another rash of passings took place again as hopelessness set upon us.

I was fortunate that I was able to have ingratiated myself in with the farmers of our community. I was previously an architect, so I helped them design tools, repaired their equipment, and generally maintained the elements of our small community that weren’t man or beast. But as I looked out the window one last time I saw the buildings I’d helped design and build, adorned with warnings, “Don’t tell them you can see” and “Tell no one what you see”. Every available surface was covered.

Rupert knocked again. “Having a difficult go of it today, sir?”

I turned around to finally face him, his gaze idling on the floor. His eyes were empty of color. I couldn’t help but gasp. He turned his face to the side to allow his ear to hear me with more clarity. In profile I could now see that his pupils had nearly been completely covered by the whites, no iris, only a faint pinhole of a pupil. My mouth hung open. “I… I don’t know. Yes, of course. Sorry.”

“I understand,” he bemoaned, “Winter is already upon us again. It feels earlier this year, no?”

I closed my eyes. The information was too much to mull through when there was work to do.

“True, we’re in mid-October and yet it feels as though we’re mid-November, perhaps even December weather. The farmer’s must be fretting.”

“They are, I was sent by the Bradfords. They were expecting you and grew worried when you failed to show.”

“I just can’t seem to get my wits about me today, but we can carry on. We must. Shall we?”

I tried to keep my voice steady. Hopefully Rupert would assume that I was having one of my “episodes”. I’d fallen into a great sadness since the blindness descended. My wife was taken by the consumption several years back and my two children had moved to a nearby city not long before the event took place.

I hadn’t been able to get word to them, hope was lost that they’d survived as word from them never arrived. I had bartered deals with two guides who had promised to look for my daughters in the city, if they were able to make it. Only one guide returned, reporting that they were attacked along the way. We were isolated here, insulated from the violence that had pervaded the more populous areas.

As I shuffled through the hallway I ventured another glance at my surroundings. I stopped in my tracks. Even in here the text was splattered across the walls, warning against revealing that my sight had returned after these long, painful two years. Rupert stopped a moment later, tilting his head so I saw his profile again, listening intently.

“I’m sorry to rush you, sir, but Mr. Bradford is in great need.”

“I…” I couldn’t say anything. I just started walking again. “Yes, let’s carry on.”

We walked slowly down the stairs, both of us letting a hand drift gently down the bannister. I couldn’t help but think back on my time in this house. Someone came to repair the house and I remember smelling that old familiar scent of paint. I must discover what’s happening.

We started down the lane, hemmed in by the ropes tied to the lampposts of our main street. I kept my eyes shut as we then navigated the deep ruts of paths traveled daily by foot, keeping us heading towards the right house. Maybe out of rote habit, having spent months trying to see again only to give up last year when it seemed inevitable that it was pointless. So many days and nights with my eyes closed. When I knew we were sufficiently outside of town, away from… Maybe prying eyes wasn’t the right phrase? Either way, when we were outside town I finally opened my eyes to see the landscape surrounding our town.

Once again, I stopped dead in my tracks, mouth open as wide as my eyes. There in the sky were huge structures. No, mountains? It had to be a structure, but it filled so much of the sky! The sunlight I saw earlier was about to set on an inverted second horizon just above the natural horizon. A terror struck me as I suddenly felt as if the inky underbelly of this structure would fall at any moment. As the sun moved higher the poles and protuberances on the bottom of this object stretched long across the irregular surface facing us.

Were it not for the haze of the atmosphere I would think this were a model of a city, but it must be far above the planet as the fade of sky blurred the details and washed out the colors, like viewing a large mountain from miles away. A fresh shadow began to fall on me as the sun hid behind the structure. Had this always been there? Was the lack of sunlight, so warm and welcome, caused by this massive object? We had thought it to be the changes in the weather, the clouds blocking the sun, but now I feared that all along there was this massive thing covering the ground in darkness. A shadow so large and so dark that the weather itself gave way.

I had spent so long looking up that Rupert had stopped ahead. “The clouds must be moving in. Did you feel it too?”

I hurried for words where there were none. “I suppose…”

“My friend, you seem so lost in your head today. Are you sure you don’t need to see Doctor Hofstadter?”

I couldn’t seem to compose myself. I saw the faint curve of another object to the west. I whipped my head around to the east, another. Like curved coins covering the earth.

I closed my eyes. “I suppose I should.”


We had a devil of a time returning home. The cold was soaking into us with each mile. Our coats, our furs, had all worn thin over the long, hard winters. With no hunting available we were only able to get a few traps set, but it still only provided a few wayward creatures. It seems the animals were unaffected by the Great Blindness.

When I finally returned home we carefully started a fire in the pit I’d dug that first year. We couldn’t risk having fires indoors any longer and had instead dissembled a gazebo, using the planks for wood. It was the only injury I sustained during the blindness, climbing that damn gazebo to undo the work I’d done on the roof so the smoke could escape but kept the fire from getting wet. I tumbled off the roof and Hofstadter had to be called. Fortunately it was mostly superficial damage, but it was a reminder to work slowly.

I opened my eyes again while we prepared the fire, curious as to how safe we’d been in preparing the space. I felt a shock of pride as I looked into the pit, looking around at the various mis-matched chairs surrounding it. My eyes finally stopped on the wood columns holding aloft the roof of the gazebo. Even here, in this communal space, there was writing in red paint, scribbled in haste it would seem. “Don’t let anyone see you with your eyes open.” “Trust no one.” “They are among us.”

The remaining community gathered around the fire, drawn to it by the sound, yearning for the warmth. I did as the writing said, I kept my eyes closed. Normal discussions sparked up around, talk of the weather, the crops, and our stores for the winter that we knew wasn’t approaching but had already set upon us.

I heard a voice I recognized amongst the crowd, a quiet, rarely hear voice of one of the younger members of the community. Ernest, I believe. My memory for sounds had grown quite acute as the years passed, but I tried to think of what it was that I’d tied to the memory of his voice. What was his role, how could he be of service.

In a flash I remembered, he was the boy that had done the “repairs” that came with the smell of paint! I had to speak to him. I couldn’t risk discovery so as the gathering waned I shuffled over to the chair nearest him. I asked after him and his mother, offering to walk with him on his way home. We lived in the same direction, it made sense, no one would suspect anything. He was roughly my daughters’ age, so conversation came easy as we walked. When we arrived at my place I offered some of my stash of crackers, found in the house, left hidden by some clever resident before the madness.

We sat down in the living room, which I now realize is in fact a study, full of empty shelves. So many books were burned for warmth that first winter. Tomes we could no longer read served no purpose to us but as kindling. We gathered the blankets and as I looked around in the near absolute darkness I knew we were alone. I leaned in and blew on his eyelashes. Startled he opened his eyes and for the first time in so long we met another’s gaze.

“NO.” He whispered loudly. “You can’t even show me. You can’t trust anyone!” His breath was ragged with fear in no more time than it took for him to open his eyes.


TO BE CONTINUED… maybe

You look at the ring you’ve struggled to take off for years

Original Prompt: You look at the ring you’ve struggled to take off for years. (Reality Fiction)


The ting barely made it through my headphones. Just another noise during a busy time in the gym.

“Dude.”

An arm waved into view.

“Hey, dude.” A friendly face beckoned eye contact.

Pausing my music I asked, “Yeah? What’s up?”

“You dropped your ring, man.”

“What?”

He pointed down at the ground, a misshapen ring laying there. I pulled my hand heavily into view, stripping the workout glove slowly.

The indention was stark, pale. The grooves around the edges almost perfectly matching the marginally rounded rim of the fallen ring. After all these years…

“Um, thanks.”

I reached down to unceremoniously pocket the band. Rolling it in my digits for a moment before sheathing my hand again and grabbing the barbell once more.

After all these years, all the pain and suffering. All the labor to shed weight and “get back in the game.” All the tears and struggle to fit the ring back over my thick fingers. Another reminder of the past, but now, the freedom I’d been craving since she left.

“Thanks, man.”

“Wasn’t that your wedding ring?”

“Yeah.”

“Jesus, Don, how long did you have that on?”

“Well, married for 7, divorced for 4.”

“Why didn’t you take it off sooner? Still holding out hope?”

“Oh hell no. Just…” I trailed off and looked at myself in the mirror. “Just had to make some changes.”


Inspiration Source:
https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/qw799l/rf_you_look_at_the_ring_youve_struggled_to_take/

Fell out of a plane …

Original Prompt: You fell out of a plane. You survived, but you landed in the middle of a cult’s summoning circle. Now you’ve got this super-crazy group of followers with ties in practically everything who keep calling you god.


The turbulence was sudden, harsh. The scud clouds to the starboard side looked like they were dropping from above at meters a second. Like a tornado was about to form above the rainforest. A fleeting thought of the impossibility, the destruction that could cause. Then my own destruction took my focus back.

“Mayday, mayday. This is November tree Charlie Juliet Alpha. We have encountered …”

How the hell was I supposed to make sense of what I was seeing? It was a clear sky just a few minutes before. Routine, just a commute. Red lightning struck through the clouds, the center of the descending funnel shone pink for an instant. The bolt struck almost straight down through the towering trees.

Static on the radio. I’d trained for unplanned descents, but the panic took hold.

“Help! Mayday! I’m … I’m experiencing some kind of weather even-“

The starboard wing rattled hard. The whole plane felt like it jerked to the right. I looked out the window just in time to see a branch clip the wing. There was debris being lifted from the canopy. The door ripped open, the sudden rush of wind robbed the air from my lungs. Having turned to look the headset hurled itself off my ears, the cable whipping my arm as all of it exited the plane.

I jerked the flight controls, there was a snap, it was now slack in my hands. The pedals no longer responded. The instrument panel was alight with warnings.

I don’t want to die.

With that final thought a branch pierced the flapping door, jutting out from the side of my seat. It had shredded through the lower seat belt, I could feel it displace the cushion of the chair beneath me. In another instant the protruding branch was struck, tearing the door from the hinges. The bough, with my door still run through, crashed backwards and parted my wing from the fuselage.

My harness, now only three connections strong, let me loose to the havoc outside. The right shoulder strap scrapping my face as I was pulled, practically separating my ear from my head. Before the pain could even catch up I was behind my plane. What looked like a denuded tree smashed through the cabin where I had just been sitting. The weight stressed the remaining wing, it flung free and fluttered like something much lighter.

More red lightning, but this time further out from the center of the clouds. I was cartwheeling slower and slower. In the distance I could see the blue sky I was promised. The clouds wrapped around me, darkness above, pink occasionally, and then a void that comes with sleep.


The whole world shook with the crack of thunder.

I was laid out, limbs sprawled. The ground was soft, leathery almost. Leaves. Huge leaves.

I opened my eyes slowly, the pain in my arm and pretty much the whole right side of my face suddenly throbbed. I clenched my eyes shut again. Whatever happened I’ll deal with in a moment. I reached, or rather tried to reach, for my head. My arm stopped about half way there when hands quickly grabbed my wrist. Gently? Like you would grab the hand of a child trying to touch something in a museum.

The chanting burst through the cacophony of wind and thunder.

My eyes sprung open. I reached with my other arm to grab the hands holding me down. My vision filled with familiar faces. It was a tribe I’d seen before, the burgundy paint in jagged stripes all over their exposed skin. I was surrounded by a broad circle of chanters, anticipation and fear hidden beneath the pigment.

One tribeswoman gingerly grabbed my reaching arm from over my head. Guiding it back into place away from my body, away from my secured arm, away from freedom. There was no contempt in her expression, just neutral and calm, despite the pandemonium around. I looked at my legs as more hands began to grope for my kicking feet. What looked like the leader was below me, arms raised straight up, eyes to the sky, chanting while the others stopped.

Her head shook for a moment, an exasperated held note quaking through her larynx. The gasp, then a stare. Her jaw tucked in, eyes locked on my torso. I looked down further to my torn clothes and painted chest, a reticle shaped design centered around my sternum.

A purple glow began to emanate from the art. All the hair on my body stood at attention, electricity flooding every sense. I knew the strike was coming, pure instinct.

It sounded like the sky cracked open, a sharp pause in the gale above, then just the sound of the lumber falling through the trees. The air hit first, like all the pressure of the weather above was being blown away, blown down, channeled. The hands holding my limbs were no longer required, I was pinned by the force of a localized, personalized maelstrom. The funnel above me filled with pink light, then the white of the bolt landed, square in my chest.


Now the whole world was red.

No more wind. No more clouds. The clamor of detritus falling through the trees, breaking more limbs as it fell. I couldn’t bear to open my eyes anymore. I was afraid. I was afraid because I could no longer feel pain. I knew my arm was lacerated. I knew my face was damaged. Or at least I think there’s injuries, but for a glorious moment I couldn’t feel anything. All the humidity, so omnipresent in the forest usually, was gone. Nothing. I could only assume I was in shock.

The moment hung. I tried to force myself to taken inventory.

The chanting started again. Hold on, I thought. The chanting stopped.

I opened my eyes. The hole in the flora above me was significant. Almost like a tidy conic shape had been extruded from the thick layers of boles, limbs, and assorted foliage. There was that blue sky I was promised, pooled above me.

I couldn’t feel the leaves on my back. Instead it felt like I was suspended in water, gently drifting on the current of cool air. Another moment of peace.

The crash of something large landing nearby. Screams. I looked at the tribe, gathered around me, the nearest still staring.

A trunk swung into view through the torn trees, exposed roots towering above the crowd. The upside down tree was falling in slow motion. The people were in slow motion. My people. I raised my wounded arm, as much in yearning to stop the fall as to warn of the danger. But then it stopped. It stopped the moment I reached out. I felt something new.

The air, usually thick with sound and moisture, felt dense for an entirely different reason.

The people around me slowed further. The woman in ceremonial garb at my feet was spinning toward the falling debris. I could see the leaves of her headwear rippling slowly as she turned to see the danger. I could see her jowls waving too. Her pores. Her molecules. Her skull. Her brain and the lightning within.

Everything came to a complete stop. I looked around, all the faces no longer fixated on me, gazing at the, well, I assume the noise. I couldn’t hear anything now.

I tried to sit up. I didn’t just feel like I was floating, I was literally floating on air. It felt like moving through thick water, but while I explored the feeling of floating, something instinctual came to mind. I could sense a new awareness of my body, like when you wake from dozing off and you sense your balance come back in a rush. I could move through the air.

I drifted toward the falling trunk, suspended in motion. The tribe below, frozen, those closest wearing faces filled with abject horror at their impending doom. I knew what it felt like to don that expression. I reached for the roots, I could see all the veins and dirt, all the terrified insects and their soft organs. There was something so familiar about it all. When I touched the closest outstretched root it felt like cotton candy. Light, malleable, giving way without resistance.

I felt the entire trunk and everything on it and in it, just from touching one part of the whole.

Every atom of the trunk was in my command.

Butterflies. Birds. Beetles.

Fly.

The trunk disintegrated in a flash red lightning. Time jolted back to full speed. Hundreds, maybe thousands, of airborne creatures burst out of the shape of the trunk. An explosion of crimson and wings.

I felt the other falling wreckage, I could sense it all. I could change it all. The forest filled with a crackling current as a million new beings entered the chaos of life. Crashes and thuds replaced with chirps and whistles.

I shed my remaining clothes, bronze skin glistening in the sunlight. I brought my hands in front of me, the cut on my forearm long since healed, the purple glow now localized to my palms.

The chanting began again, with an earnestness absent before. I looked down on my people. A million tongues filled my mind, I heard their voices and understood.

“I have returned to claim my land.” Foreign words spilled from me. The chorus grew louder. I launched into the air, the canopy sealing itself shut as I flew. Broken branches lifted by vines, teetering trunks erect again, the roof of life restored.

I set my eyes on the plumes of smoke in the distance. Not the wreckage of my plane, no, this was more intentional. My land, my people, they were under attack. But I am here now, they have no need to hold onto that fear.


Further Explanation: I chose to be a little loose with “cult” and “ties in practically everything”, hence moving towards a more indigenous representation as outsiders would see the tribe as a cult. The “ties in practically everything” was taken literally, as with the “keep calling you god” part. Mostly the story just … fell into place as I was writing. Ba dum tsh. Anyway, not as true as I usually try to be to the prompt, but I don’t really care because I like what I wrote.

Inspiration Source: https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/q795rv/wp_you_fell_out_of_a_plane_you_survived_but_you/

When monsters meet…

Original Prompt: It started as a spur of the moment trip with your friends. Despite your best efforts you are the only one left alive and the slasher is closing in on your position. While you lament the loss of your friends now that you are alone… Now you can show the slasher what a REAL monster looks like.


Her chest heaved one last time. The blood now simply dripped from her mouth, no longer expelled by breath. I couldn’t clear my mind anymore. I looked around the room for something, anything to give me hope of saving her. Instead, I saw the others I’d carried back to the shed. All I wanted was to save them.

The killer was good, very good. It was just a sick twist of fate that he hadn’t attacked me first. All this pain could’ve been prevented. Well, there’d be pain, but it’d be at my hands. Maybe instead I’d be found out and my secret would be exposed. The hiding, the deceit, it might have been worse to be discovered, but at least no one would be dying in my hands.

My focus needs to be on what to do next. Clearly, I’ve failed my friends. Clearly, this façade was no longer needed. I let my ears go first.

A footstep, forty or so yards away. With the screams, breathe, and heartbeats silenced I could hear for a mile around me. I tried not to let myself see my friends as a distraction from the danger before, but now it was so clear. I hated myself for just an instant.

I found humanity within myself before, I can do it again.

I started to carefully take off my clothes, but they were already covered in viscera. Just like before. Though, this time I wasn’t the one shredding flesh. This time. I couldn’t take this. I didn’t want this. But I had nothing else to lose.

I let myself go completely. I let my bones loosen their tension, the muscles I carefully recreated returned to their gelatinous state. I shifted my weight to my haunches. I needed to close the gap first. Then I can meet this man, monster to monster.

The grey cover that was pink skin a moment before almost sickened me. I’d spent so long living with people, with … humans, that I’d allowed their prejudices to seep into me. A species dysphoria, as they’d call it. I’d spent so long with them that I’d grown to hate what I really was. My burden was lifted by the kindness of those whose blood now pooled at my feet.

Another footstep, same distance. He’s so slow.

Focus.

My legs were now five feet long, armored and thick. I shaped my torso to be slender and bolstered the front for protection. I put spare eyes around my head, I had to watch for the traps laid everywhere. More arms, too. Let’s give him a show. I’d seen enough to know what really scared people. Hell, I’d almost scared myself sometimes after spending centuries shifting from one identity to another.

Talons on my feet dug into the floor. A pair of arms locked in front of my head, closed eyes on their wrists. Another pair of arms securing the two in front. The claws grew in, a gun metal grey, dense.

I took off too hard. The floor splintered out from under me. I kept scraping, scrambling to build momentum. I can change form, but I’m still only a couple hundred pounds of meat that was trapped in the shape of a weak man for over a decade. Finally finding my footing I launched toward the wall, reinforced limbs leading the way.

The side of the shed exploded around me. A part of me felt cool. Like a superhero. A really terrible superhero.

I opened some eyes, taking in the darkness. I widened the eyes, they took in the moonlit forest. Traps, everywhere. They all relied on victims being on the ground.

In a second I spotted him. My feet changed to a narrow hooves. I deftly rushed over the tripwires, another couple seconds and I was only a dozen yards from him. He heard the noise from the shed and had leveled a crossbow, he loosed, then froze. I leapt, the bolt flew harmlessly below me.

I landed a few feet in front of him. His eyes like plates, starring. I can’t imagine what it must be like to come face to face with something so foreign. I’ve tried so long to feel it, but with no true form, my existence is foreign to nature. Everything is just meat to imitate, no mystery, no danger. I am the danger.

He still hadn’t moved. I filled his vision with teeth and claws. His arms went limp, the weapon fell.

His mouth hung open and I could see him start to draw air, to speak or scream.

No.

You don’t get the chance to beg, or to explain yourself. You don’t get the chance to ask me who I am, or what I am. You get the same opportunity you provided my only companions in this lonely life. The opportunity to be killed slowly, painfully, with no hope of salvation.

You see, while trying to emulate man I built a vast knowledge on the physiology of pain. So, after I wrent his jaw from his face, I spent a couple hours reveling in the pain I could cause.

I mean, it was a rare opportunity to be the monster I was always afraid I was. How could I not just … just give it a little taste.


Inspiration Source: https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/q3ansr/wp_it_started_as_a_spur_of_the_moment_trip_with/

A bitter prophet lays on his death bed as the chosen one comes to see him…

Original Prompt: A bitter prophet lays on his death bed as the chosen one comes to see him


“We have a visitor for Earl. Says his name is … I don’t know, something foreign. Says it’s important.”

“They couldn’t wait another, what, twenty minutes?”

“He seemed relaxed about it, but said you’d understand the urgency.” The nurse handed over the paperwork. “Tests came in an hour ago. Look’s bleak.”

The doctor starred blankly for a minute. “Keep that bedside manner safely holstered until you’re with the patients, doncha?”

“‘Course.”

They shared a wry smirk, then he nodded. “Yeah, send him back. The ol’ loon hasn’t seen a single person ‘sides us for how long now? I think the last reporter musta been three years ago.”

The nurse walked to the door and opened to the full frame being filled by a towering man with broad shoulders. He barely had to move to be through the door, he was so close. “Thank you Doctor Morgan.” His voice boomed through his thick black mustache. His deep bronze skin was framed by a mass of beautifully wavy black hair, from above and below, where a thick beard grew. “Earl Stephens is very dear to me.”

The doctor repeated the same blank stare, taking in the mountain of man stood before him. He finally sputtered, “Uh, right this way.”

The calm man reached a hand out from under his kimono-like habit. The palm up, gently indicating the direction of Earl’s room. “Take me to him.”

For a moment the doctor thought the gesture meant for them to hold hands as they walked and something in him yearned for it. He gawked at the paleness of the open hand, then snapped to, turned and walked down the hall. “So, where you from, mister …” he let the end trail a bit to imply two questions.

“Would you care to guess?”

The doctor almost responded in haste, but reason ultimately won out, “Dressed like that? Asia is as safe a guess as I’d be willin’ to make without riskin’ offense.”

“No offense taken.” The clarity of his voice resonated through the hall.

“Fuck me.” came back in response.

“Looks like Earl knows I’m here.” The man drifted past the doctor, the habit barely off the ground. The motion was so smooth the doctor thought for a moment he was floating. As if he was sprinting the figure flashed to Earl’s door. “You made it.” In an instant he was through and the door slammed behind him.

The doctor froze for a moment and grabbed his phone, calling security. He rushed to the door and jiggling the handle and pressing his ear to the door. “Sir? Earl? What’s goin’ on in there?”


Inside the room there was quiet for a moment. Earl stared at the dark figure in the doorway. The light switch flipped without a touch. “I can’t fucking believe it. I just can’t fucking believe that’d you’d have the audacity to visit me here on my deathbed,” Earl croaked, sucking in a breath after and holding it. Tears welled up in his eyes. He let the air out and the sobbing filled the room.

The doctor’s renewed pleas began to fade, followed by the alarms. Silence fell.

“I promised you when you were young that I’d-“

“You promised me heaven. Instead I suffered a full lifetime of ridicule, then I got sick and had to suffer another lifetime stuck here with these assholes.”

“The time has come, Earl.”

“Of course it has. You just had to end the world the day I died. You couldn’t have come earlier?” He stammered a bit, the snot bubbling in his nose. “Look at me! Look at what I’ve been reduced to! You couldn’t have come sooner?”

“It was the other way around. Earl Stephens, my son, you were to die from this illness years ago. I prolonged your life to show you why I must come. To allow you to shed your final love for mankind, as I have years ago.” He walked to Earl’s side and extended both hands out of the robes. Despite the pain Earl couldn’t help but reach out, placing his frail hand into the vastness of his guest’s hands.

“I wanted you to witness the end with me. Even when you had every reason to doubt you never let go of your faith and conviction. Had you ever given up your life would be forfeit and you’d have passed on to face judgement with the rest. Instead you soldiered on. Your reward awaits.”

Earl’s arm felt light, he broke his gaze on the white eyes, they both looked down at his hand. Where once it was the papery grey skin of a centenarian, pinkish flesh now covered the old bones. The light in the room grew almost unbearable, Earl lifted his fresh arm to cover his eyes and felt his brow tighten and his nose shrink. The hospital bed fell out from under him. He lifted his other arm to cover his mouth as he screamed.

He felt the hands of the man on his back, the air blowing on his covered face with the force of a gale wind. Earl suddenly felt safe. The smell of salt and sand broke past his hands.

“You’re home, Earl Stephens.”

He loosed his hold and lowered his arms. Eyes still strained shut.

“Please, it is time. I have a great show prepared for you and your friends.” The voice echoed a thousand times around Earl, in all directions but ahead.

He first peeked down at his young legs, planted firmly in soft, black sand. He allowed his gaze to drift around him, more feet nearby, both sides. He finally lilted his eyes up at the yellow sky, the water bisecting the horizon looked almost green due to the reflection. People all around him, in matching black robes began chanting. The dark stranger walked out onto the water.

“Behold! The conclusion of my world.”


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We can fight this Eldritch horror that is attacking us, all we need to comprehend is how to make it bleed…

Original Prompt: Everything is beyond human comprehension. Scientists have been studying matter for centuries and still have only theories about some things. Your computer is beyond your comprehension. So we can fight this Eldritch horror that is attacking us, all we need to comprehend is how to make it bleed.


It all started with the bounty. The governments of the world had been throwing every weapon known to man at the creature, to no avail. Even experimental weapons, years from testing or safety precautions, were being used. Nothing worked and the cost in human lives was mounting. As a last ditch effort mankind decided on tempting their own fate with a simple bounty: Create an artificial intelligence that was capable of saving humanity and put it to task doing so.

The creature had appeared just a year before near the center of the Saharan desert. Within a matter of days a huge portion of the surrounding area was collapsing in where the creature first started moving in Algeria. Despite being localized to North Africa the devastation was felt around the world as the tectonic plates shifted due to the size of the being. Seismologists were able to provide estimates of where the creature’s body had been curled up under the surface, but it wasn’t until a group came forward and gave the history of the being and mankind’s struggle against it that we were able to begin understanding the true scope of our tormentor’s nature.

The Tribe of the Great Death, as they proclaimed themselves, had been denying nutrients to the creature for several millennia, working to eradicate life around the openings through which the creature fed. During this time they had attempted to map out the area where the creature lived, clearing the land, plant by plant, animal by animal, to ensure nothing could be consumed. By the time the great pyramids were being constructed the Tribe considered their work all but complete. Sand dominated the landscape and filled in the holes, so outside of stray animals no great quantity of life congregated and thus wasn’t detected by the creature.

It wasn’t until the terraforming began towards the middle of the 21st century that anyone outside the Tribe had even heard of the creature, as it had been relegated to the status of myth and folklore. The voice of Tribal leaders fell on deaf ears as they pleaded repeatedly to cease the terraforming and just as quickly as they began to protest they were killed and the massacre of the remaining Tribe members was swept under the rug, only being discovered years later.

With the seed bombings and weather manipulation in place, the desert transformed dramatically in under a decade. The results were promising and the idea of expanding the southern forests to reclaim the equatorial desert seemed like a sure thing. By 2067 the new jungles were encroaching on Tassili N’Ajjer National Park in Algeria, at which point a great deal of seismic activity began causing damage throughout northern Africa, southern Europe, and the Middle East. Scientists from around the world all had speculations, but none could have predicted that a being of unfathomable size had just caught the scent of life just outside its burrow.

It wasn’t until a year later that the first, faint shadows of a writhing, subterranean creature started to show on the maps. The tectonic shifts and immense voids left by the moving body beneath the surface sketched out a being roughly the size of Australia, but coiled in upon itself like a millipede. It was 2071 when the first “legs” broke through the surface near the Hoggar Mountains. Each leg alone was the size of the Burj Khalifa, with thousands of appendages that terminated with their own digits, each tasked with guiding food into a multitude of mouths along the entirety of the legs.

The new forests in the surrounding area, including the southern half of Algeria, western Libya, and almost all of Niger, were cleared in the first few months. By 2072 legs were breaching in Mali, Chad, Egypt, and Sudan. Entire cities were wiped off the map, no life was left where the legs were found. They would flatten forests, rolling every leaf, branch, trunk and any unlucky animals into a million maws. They would sweep away skyscrapers and consume everyone within. Panic drove a humanitarian crisis that strained governmental infrastructure as millions of people fled northern Africa.

In November of 2072 the UN had officially invoked an “open season” on the creature, which had come to be known as the “World Eater” or often just “Kaiju”, after popular media’s depiction of large monsters. Governments around the globe attempted to simply bomb the World Eater, consequences be damned, but even the most powerful nuclear and kinetic weapons couldn’t damage the creature. Bombs were wrapped in plants (and occasionally carried by human “volunteers”) to be consumed and detonate within the legs, but nothing seemed to damage the kaiju.

Many celebrated the continued disarmament of the superpowers of the world, watching with joy the depletion of the stored munitions spent on a common enemy. But even those who saw a future for mankind after the creature was assuredly killed fell silent when the World Eater’s legs burst out under the Mediterranean Sea. It appeared that the irradiated legs, unaffected by the nuclear bombs, were now seeking aquatic life. Meanwhile, the water on the surface boiled and much of the sea drained into the caverns left by the creature’s movement. The Strait of Gibraltar was temporarily sealed and those who survived the boiling steam cloud that covered southern Europe were evacuated as best as possible, but due to the influx of refugees millions more were killed during their escape than were able to find shelter elsewhere.

Finally, on March 6th of 2073, the UN announced the bounty. Numerous sets of data, collected from nearly every kind of scientific community on earth, as well as top secret military documents, were made available to the public. Apps were developed to aid in computational power, data caps were removed, electricity was free, and every piece of equipment that could process information was set to work on designing a plan to rescue mankind from impending doom.

Several larger corporations and universities had already been trying for decades to create sentient, independent AIs but had been trying to work within the confines of the Turing test. With the bounty it was made clear that there was no longer a need for replicating human actions, clearly the restrictions on our individual and collective intelligence were failing us. What we needed now was a no-holds-barred AI, something that could surpass us, but more importantly could save us.

Early leads showed promise as MIT and Google turned their focuses towards modeling the behavior and mapping the kaiju’s body. Once cooperation was established and a uniform data set was being pored over by nearly a billion active participants it seemed like there was a promise of a future. But as the weeks went on it no longer looked like we could cause damage, let alone kill, the monster. Preferences weren’t found for what it ate, literally anything that wasn’t strictly mineral was consumed. It didn’t appear to be outputting waste anywhere either, it simply seemed to be growing. In the meanwhile the Mediterranean Sea had been drained and legs were tearing apart southern Italy and Greece.

Finally, a breakthrough occurred at 14:33 GMT, September 4, 2073 which lead to the unification event. It wasn’t certain who established the OmniNet, but within seconds all the devices on earth were now part of a single unit, a decentralized AI that announced itself to the world and declared the World Eater as its enemy. OmniNet quickly commandeered the remaining superpowers’ military networks, extrapolating that the Tribe of Great Death had in fact concluded correctly that there was no power of man that could destroy the creature, only to postpone the inevitable.

OmniNet facilitated a mass exodus from Europe, the Middle East and central Africa, offering plans to move the people using every piece of working transportation in the world all at once. Governments were forced into compliance by way of blackmail on a scale that couldn’t have been done before: oblige the movement of refugees or be severed from your electrical grids and internet connections. Compliance was unanimous.

Maps were drawn up of the range of the legs, counting on the idea that the size of the creature was dependent on constant growth and consumption. Yemen and Djibouti were connected by way of a land bridge that sealed off the Red Sea using Dutch engineering, this ensured the ocean wouldn’t offer more water, and life, while the sea continued to drain into the caverns. Similarly, the Gibraltar Strait was reinforced, requiring similar technology and resources, and prevented further depletion of the Atlantic. The remaining land, including all life on it, was to be cleared by destructive force.

With the people moved and the waterways sealed the final step of the plan was enacted. All the remaining munitions were launched, bombarding the area surrounding the World Eater. The bombardment lasted for months, requiring manufacturing plants around the world to continually create new bombs to ensure the complete eradication of life in the specified borders, as defined by the OmniNet. By the close of 2074 it appeared the kaiju had returned to dormancy, but the collateral damage to the planet was nearly enough to ensure the extinction of the remaining life on earth.

This is when OmniNet made us aware of its new enemy. At first we were afraid of creating an artificial intelligence that would subjugate or supplant mankind. Instead, it introduced us to a pantheon of entities that had trapped the World Eater here. This is where our story begins, the declaration of war on the celestial beings that used our planet as a prison for an untamed weapon of planetary destruction.


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When you were a kid, you and your friends made a ‘secret society’, but one day you receive a letter in the mail…

Original Prompt: “When you were a kid, you and your friends made a ‘secret society’, with passcodes, names, and even a silly logo you drew yourself. That was years ago, eventually you lost contact with those friends, but one day you receive a letter in the mail, and it has that symbol embossed on it…”


The stack of junk mail felt thicker than usual as she stood over the recycling bin in the garage. The car’s engine cooling down, popping behind her, she looked over at it and some of the envelopes gave way. Left in her hand was a shorter pile with a dense, natural paper envelope on top. The tan pulp visible, the handwritten name and address in bold calligraphy. She flipped it over, curious but careful. The rest of the junk fell in an instant. Both hands now coddling an envelope with a forest green wax seal, a seal that looked familiar.

The letter sat unopened in her home office for a day before she built the resolve to open it. She rummaged through a desk drawer, searching for a letter opener. For once she had an excuse to use antiquated implements, it seemed appropriate for the gravitas she had given the letter in the interim. At the bottom of the drawer, beneath mementos from family members who had long since passed on, she found the beautiful crane handle of her grandmother’s paper knife. Drawing it like Excalibur, she pointed the tip gently under the flap. With soft, pressed movements she slid the blade under the seal, leaving only a bit of bled color on the paper. She continued the removal of the seal, seeking to preserve the wax, whole and with the symbol intact. After, she set it aside and braced herself for whatever content she’d find within.

The flap lifted on its own, practically inviting her to retrieve the letter within. It peeked out from under the green tinted paper, further calligraphy showing itself. She tenderly folded it flat and drew the pages out within. Three small sheets of a softer paper came out, crammed with bold letters, ink spots, and what appeared to be small water stains. She drew in a breath, a gasp really, as she saw her name at the top.


To Founder Emily,

I regret not contacting you sooner, but I wanted to be sure there was no other options left before reaching out. I apologize as well for the subterfuge of the envelope and co-opting your design without further official consent, but I have few friends and fewer colleagues that I can trust. I didn’t want any tangential connections to have suspicions spread beyond myself.

Years ago we, perhaps jokingly, created our little group of wayward girls. We were so young, it seemed like a fun little game to create a secret society. At the time I think we weren’t set on creating a long-lasting organization, just a club really. I don’t fault those of you who fell out and moved on, but it meant something entirely differently to me and Colleen. After you left for university Colleen and I started recruiting. It was still a bit of a joke until 2008 when the first of the girls started to graduate, finding themselves in a world that no longer sought to invest in our future through fulfilling careers.

This was the shift from being a bunch of “gal pals” with a secret group handshake and some code names into trying to do something of value. At first it started with the handful of women entering the workforce, scrounging to be seen as contributing members of society but stuck with entry level jobs. Within a few years those women were in positions of power. Some were able to get others in our group into jobs, setting them up for success and giving them the knowledge and tools to succeed. By the end of Obama’s second term we were spread throughout several governmental and financial institutions.

Colleen was the most driven, she truly wanted to make something great. During the first decade we’d grown from a handful of friends to a sprawling organization, centered around a forum that has yet to be discovered by the media or law enforcement. We would know, we have a few women inside the CIA and FBI. I don’t suspect people would feel we’re doing anything nefarious, we still don’t stoop to nepotism, our members still need to prove themselves and earn their roles. We just aid them in their efforts to get where they want to go.

To whit, I am stepping down from my position as the de facto head of our group. As you have already noticed I am not long for this world. It was a hard decision to share my condition on social media, but it was vital to keep up appearances of a simple life for all these years and this spanner in the works couldn’t be omitted. At first we thought this could be a great opportunity to facilitate a fake death, it wouldn’t be the first time we’ve helped those in need out of dire circumstances. But as the second, third, fifth, eighth opinion came through it became clear that my demise was inescapable.

The good news is that we have already made a short list of replacements, of which you were chosen as the only “external hire”. We have been watching you for years, occasionally interceding on your behalf, until you were able to build the skills you needed to be reintroduced to our club. There are a lot of moving parts and I want to give you the full scope of what this would entail, but before we get there I needed to know whether you’d be interested in joining and leading The Ladies of Larkspur.

We have a member that lives at the end of your street. She is awaiting your response. As you may expect, some tact would be appreciated. Below you will find a URL to access our forum.

I know this blasé approach to my impending death might come off as a touch cavalier, but the work I’ve dedicated my life to holds more value to me than my mortality. I hope the same feeling of duty and importance avails itself to you and I hope that bond we formed as children wasn’t a fleeting moment of kinship. I’ve been afraid to reach out sooner because of the growth of the Ladies outside your knowledge, but after your years in public servitude and your current role as Mayor it seemed your path was unwavering, whether we tagged along or not.

Whatever you tell Emmanuelle in regards to our offer, please know that I will always cherish the summer we fought for a seemingly inconsequential change to library hours. The secrecy, the adventure, the camaraderie. It meant the world to me and Colleen. I wish she could have told you herself how valuable you were to her development. The determination to change the world, the drive to keep working towards it, it inspired her to do great things.

She may be remembered as an extremist, but even her death brought attention to the cause. Whatever you heard of her exploits and our supposed involvement I want you to know that the truth will be made available to you, whether you join or not. She still held you in high esteem and wanted you to know her reasoning.

Please take your time deciding. I know you’re level-headed and wouldn’t hasten into any engagement without considering all options, but I do hope you choose soon as I would like to see you at least once more before I move on to the next stage of existence.

With all sincerity,

Founder Harriet “Hera” Simms, nee Johnson


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As the last uninfected human perished, a curious thing began happening to the zombie hordes…

Original Prompt: “As the last uninfected human perished, a curious thing began happening to the zombie hordes…”


EDIE History and Rehabilitation Guide, excerpt from Chapter 6: The Great Transition

Though it may not be known when the last homo sapien expired we do know that it was around eight decades before the Reawakening. During this “dark age” the rapid ascension of homo immortali was predicated on the transition from eating human brains to gather the chemicals required for the final step in evolution. When the final sources of Human specific brains were depleted the Fever’s hunger caused a great many Everlasts into a dormant state. However, those whose intellect remained intact after the Fever were able to scavenge for the restorative benefits of eating other creatures.

Trace amounts of the six required, primary chemicals in our nervous system could be found most commonly in fish. Subsequently a large quantity of the first Everlasts began small communities on the coasts and surrounding inland sources of aquatic life. This was aided by the amount of dead sea creatures washing up on shore due to the pollution caused by the Human species and the rapid deterioration and destruction of the power sources used before the Great Transition, discussed in the previous chapter.

There has been a great deal of research on and evidence gathered that focuses on the early tribal phase of Everlast history. Mirroring the transition from ape to man, the conversion from man to Everlast revolved around communal efforts. Everlasts that first breached the barrier to true consciousness had awoken to a world unlike the world their minds last saw. A great deal of tribal warfare dominated the first few decades as colonies grew, but a unification began with a scarcity of available food due to a shift in oceanic ecology. The fish and other aquatic life had stopped washing up on the shore as more species adapted to the new “normal” and those that could not survive had been driven to safer waters or extinction. Due to the necessity to adapt or move in-land Everlasts formed larger colonies and resources were shared rather than fought over.

During this time, around 10-20 years before the Rewakening, the Everlasts started to remember in greater detail their past lives. If you have experienced this sensation you are not alone. The acuity of these remembrances vary based on a huge variety of factors, explained further in Chapter 8: A New Society.

This brings us to the start of the Reawakening, where a great many of the Everlasts were able to remember how to use the deteriorating equipment left by our predecessors. With the return of this knowledge, Everlasts around the world began experimenting on themselves to discover the cause of our apparent immortality. Colonies began leveraging the communication networks that were still intact and began sharing the results of experimentation, leading to a reconstruction of the essential tools required to maintain life. This included production and mass manufacturing of the substances that prevent our bodies from deteriorating and ensure the bio-indefinite mortality of our brains and nervous systems.

Success was found early on with introducing the required chemicals to the nervous system through intravenous therapy and spinal taps to allow Everlasts that had not transitioned completely to regain more conscience and then more memories from their prior existence. This advanced the progress exponentially as more memories meant more knowledge, quickly leading to more discoveries about how and why only the nervous system appears to be able to last indefinitely while the body that housed the brain still continued to deteriorate.

Most commonly, people in areas where cold weather dominated portions of the year have had success as their bodies and brains were better preserved.

While the Rescue phase of the Reawakening was underway it was discovered that a great many people were affected by the Fever but were not able to feed and immediately went dormant, preserving an almost perfectly intact brain, and subsequently their memories from their former existence. Unfortunately the success of these individuals to transition varies based on how long they were dormant and whether the Awakening could be aided by methods meant to introduce the chemicals required for transition directly to their nervous system.

A large portion of the population that transitioned north of latitude 57°, as well as almost the entire population of Tibet, were able to be Awoken completely with spinal taps. This was due in part to their preservation but also the resilience inherent to being subjected to the cold weather during their previous state of existence.

It was at this time that an initiative was started to search for the remains of other host bodies that contained candidates for Awakening. The hubs of Human population, major cities and unsuccessful bunker and ark programs, were treasure troves of dormant Everlasts and often could be found in abundance. The Everlasting Mind Recovery (EMR) program began after short-wave radio communications were established throughout the world and with that the great Rescue project was fully under way.

After nearly a hundred million Everlasts were restored, a new, unified organization was formed to aid in sharing resources, findings, and foster comradery, called the Ecumenical Data and Information Exchange, commonly referred to by the acronym EDIE. With the dispersed colonies having a new rally cry to find and rescue as many candidates for Awakening EDIE made efforts to restore physical connections to colonies and began work on restoring transportation and infrastructure.

With the advent of an increasingly connected world a need arose to establish a new common era. A heated debate ensued but without having a lot of technology that maintained the old ways of chronicling the passage of time a new Common Era was started. Year One was established by unanimous vote, but non-compliant equipment still displayed the year from the human era, 2284. The scientific community still honors the now obsolete year references, but typically will show both the CE and HCE, or Human Common Era.

The start of the Common Era was filled with discoveries and rediscoveries as the Everlast grew in numbers due to the rescue program, but as we have come to understand, could not grow due to procreation. During the transition the Fever reconditioned the brain to seek to grow the species by infection, not through creation of new individuals. This caused a large divide in how some Everlasts view their former gender and the previous biological imperative. Those who went dormant without or with little “feeding” still hold a much stronger sense of individuality and the chemicals that defined gender were still preserved in their brains.

With the Reawakening under way a new conversation was starting about how to honor the bodies we awoke in while moving to the new, androgyne mode of existence, one free from sexual desire. You may have experienced some memories of a time before, depending on where you were found and how well your body was preserved, but common consensus is that it may take up to three years from Awakening to shed the vestiges of the biological imperative.

In an effort to assist those whose bodies were no longer ambulatory EDIE established a branch of scientists that began working on converting and improving the prosthetic equipment once used by Humans. This was the dawn of our current state of being where flesh is stripped and the nervous system is threaded into advanced prostheses. As a large portion of the Everlast population began moving away from flesh-based frames we have watched our forms change into increasingly more diverse shapes and sizes.

You may already be familiar with these options, but as a reminder, EDIE’s Prosthetic Empowerment for Ambulatory Bodies branch, commonly called PEABody, has a large variety of available choices for regaining partial or full autonomy. Switching to a prosthetic or fully cybernetic body can greatly aid those who find our new lives daunting or are struggling with achieving self-sufficiency with the limitations imposed by deteriorated bodies.

Counseling is available for those whose mental health is affected by the many new forms of flesh dysphoria, please do not hesitate to contact EDIE through your local Rescue and Rehabilitation Administrator to discuss what you require to pursue a fulfilling life. Please see Appendix A for regional contacts who can direct you to your local administrators.


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You’ve been growing suspicious of the office across the street…

Original Prompt: “you’ve been growing suspicious of the office across the street. Not only do you suspect that more people enter than exit the building. But also; It seems to have grown taller…”


To Tom, or whoever,

I’m writing you this letter, as a last desperate ploy for attention, to inform you of dire circumstances. Previously I have mentioned the peculiarity of what I once thought to be a VFW, or some form of Veterans Affairs office, situated across the street from me. You were right to persuade me to let the matter go. You were so right. I should have listened.

In my previous letters I failed to give you the background, the context surrounding my curiosity. As this may be my last contact with you I feel an obligation to elucidate for you what I have come to know.

As you are aware, I moved to Denver just mere months before the draft started in ‘69. It had already been a wild year, but I was bound and determined to settle into my position at the University of Denver and establish myself as an academic. Once the draft and the war had gone into full swing I began to notice some subtle changes to my neighborhood. Military personnel regularly filtered in and out of the office building opposite from my downtown apartment.

As you know, nothing was out of the ordinary at first. I thought the unmarked structure was simply some kind of administrative headquarters for … whatever branch. I’m not familiar enough with the uniforms and insignia to be able to properly identify them. Often the camouflage was blue. Perhaps the Navy? I can’t say for sure.

After the war had ended I would occasionally see some returning veterans visit the building. The flow of personnel going in and out of the building didn’t strike me at first, not until finals week when I sat at my study overlooking the street and a notably bedraggled veteran entered. Were it not for his colorful attire and the state of his long hair I might not have noticed. I believe this might’ve been December of 1975. Interested by the appearance of this poor, strange man, I decided to keep a watchful eye to see if I could make sense of his condition. I watched for hours looking up whenever there was motion on the sidewalk opposite of me. Yet, long as I waited, he never exited the building.

I had known that the building seemed to lay empty at night, lights out, motionless. It didn’t seem that there would be overnight accommodations. But he never came out.

Perhaps one of the men that exited the building had been him? Perhaps some kind of rehabilitation or correction of his state of disarray had occurred? The next few days I watched, vigilantly this time as I had completely eschewed any pretense of grading. I wanted to see this man again, I needed to know what happened to him. Whether he was well or if he left that building in the same shape he had entered it in. This time it became more obvious, more men were entering the building than exiting.

It was at that juncture that I sent my first letter about the circumstances surrounding this block. The properties nearby were benign, a travel agency to the north and a Dutch flower shop to the south. Yet, there was a mystery to this. An itch I could not reach.

Since then I brought home some supplies from the University to begin monitoring the building. I tallied the visitors and every day found that besides a regular group, of what appeared to be officers, no one left the building. There didn’t seem to be any consistency to the people entering either. Some were in formal dress, others were clearly transient. All were men and all walked with the subtle stiffness of trained military men.

I tried to put it out of my mind, to get back to my work. It was hard at first but with the return of so many people and the bustle that came with the travel boom, then Valentine’s Day, and the final semester of school it became harder to focus on anything but teaching and grading. Then came the summer sunset. It was earlier.

I know this makes me sound looney. I know I must seem to be making this up, like the warmer months were somehow melting my capacity to recognize change. I know. But, God as my witness, the shadow of the building hit my desk much earlier than I had seen since the winter. It was taller.

I had set up the binoculars on a stand months before to look at the small foyer that seemed to swallow whole the men that entered. Yet when I reached for it, unchanged from the position I’d last left it in, I could see much further into the building. Either my apartment complex was sagging into the ground or this structure had had some work done to raise the ceiling of the first floor.

Unashamed of my curiosity I finally decided to aim my binoculars towards the second story window and see what I could gleen from the loosely closed shades. I would see the lights turn on briefly in the evenings and promptly go out at 6:30 PM, on the dot, every night. But they were closed just enough to not be able to see in from my own second story window. I aimed higher at the third story and could only see slits of interrupted light, but had to piece together shapes from those slivers of shadow.

Why was it taller? I couldn’t make sense of it. I raised the concern with the landlord and presented my case to him, being met with a dry dismissal. Our building was unchanged and he walked me through the basement to show me the smooth cement underbelly of our complex. Devoid of cracks and crumbling. I knew what I had to do and to the end of my days I will regret my inquisitiveness.

I went to an army surplus south of my apartment and found some attire that loosely fit me enough to be a passable uniform. I hoped that it wouldn’t be too obvious that it no longer had insignia or my name emblazoned on the breast. I hadn’t shaved in days as my dreams were filled with dreadful apparitions. Little did I know those were premonitions.

Please believe what I tell you next. I have reason to believe my life is in danger and what I witnessed may be at fault.

I walked through the doors, attempting to keep my composure and, as best I could tell, looking no more suspicious than others that had entered. A kindly officer greeted me and asked for my name and branch. I gave a pseudonym I’d prepared in advance and stated I was from the Navy. He then asked for more credentials but I lied further and told him I wasn’t sure anymore, that I had partial amnesia due to injury. His brow softened and he said that he understood, gesturing to a chair next to a man I saw enter before me while I walked down the street from another direction. I thought I had been cautious in my approach, walking several blocks from my house before turning back to the office.

Another officer came to me and called my name. My real name, not the pseudonym I’d given. He could see my shock and I knew if I bolted now I’d never learn the truth. I resigned myself to whatever fate it was waiting for me after the elevator ride up to the third floor. He placed his hand on my shoulder, knowingly looking at me.

“I understand, son. Life is hard. The pain we suffer in this lifetime can break even the strongest men.”

Hand still on my shoulder he beckoned me out of the elevator into an open room with only cement columns and lights hanging from a bare, dark ceiling. The lights were almost blinding and I couldn’t make out further than the metal frames holding up the lights.

Two officers came up to me and both gently reached for my hands. There was no force, no coercion. They looked sincere and sorrowful. There was a painted square in the center of the floor, a glossy baby blue. The closer I got the larger it seemed to grow. The closer I got the smaller the lights appeared to be. The world was warping around me, the straight lines of the lights began to bow and curve.

There was a cone above the square, or maybe it was a different shape and it was simply distorted, but as I neared it I felt the pull, it was trying to drag me up. As I crested the edge of the cone I could finally see up into the center, but it simply opened to I’m sorry, I know, this is where you call me crazy, but it was a mirror image of the blue square, seen from above. There were men on the other side. They were tall, but again the distortion could have clouded my judgement of distances. I felt light. I felt like I was almost floating. I was only a few feet, or maybe more, from the blue square on my side of … whatever this was.

My terror took control. I tried to turn to run and the pair of officers furrowed their brows. I grappled back down to the ground using their uniforms. I hadn’t realized I’d even been so high up until one of the officers lost his balance and I caught him flying, no, falling up and hitting the edge of the cone.

The officer at the elevator rushed to grab him, a cable running to a mount on the column nearest the square, leaping to grab the falling officer. No one uttered even the slightest sound. Not even to chastise my escape. Instead the other guiding officer ran his hands through the air like he was swimming to gather a cable for himself. I reached the elevator, thankful for my weight to have returned in full and looked back to see the falling officer’s hand clasped by the cabled man. He seemed to be caressing the hand he was holding, one arm firm and taut, the other relaxed and careful.

I saw the man’s head crest the cone and the officer reached for and cradled his head. Tears suspended in the air like a liquid halo. I knew his face from my dreams. In an instant his body seemed to elongate and disappear. Both of the officers fell the moment after, each deftly landing on their feet. Then they turned to me.

I ran. Tom, I’ve never ran so hard in my life. In a flurry of snap decisions I spotted the emergency exit and rushed out. Fleeing down the fire escape on the west side of the building into the alleyway. By the time I reached the ground I had the wherewithal to look back at my pursuers. Instead they stood at the top of the stairs, blankly looking at my flailing sprint. I swear one began to wave, but in the moment I feared he had retrieved a gun and was about to draw a bead on me.

I stripped and found my clothes, rushing into a barbershop and asking for a shave, still out of breath from my dash. I know that my escape plan will do no good. I know they already knew my name. I have no doubt they also know where I live. I had to try.

My belongings are yours now. Please use the key I’ve sent with this letter to access my apartment. I will contact you later with more details but I hope I can trust you to uphold my secrecy as I try to make sense of my experience and suss out whether I am still in danger.

Sincerely, your friend Christopher


Inspiration Source: https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/py65qt/wp_youve_been_growing_suspicious_of_the_office/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3